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A little more practice with lighting and shadows...

Stock used:
Background: :icontitusboy25: [link]
Women: :iconnanfe-stock: [link]
Teddy: :iconmind-matter: [link]

Everything else was purchased or painted via Photoshop.

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hi! Only my second try at critiquing your awesome work.
The play of light and shadow in the foreground creates a kind of fog effect for me. lighting captures my eye the most.
The figure is also overwhelmed by it. She melts into the shadows, which is cool but I wish I could see more of her figure. Is a light source behind her? Could it light up her back some more? Even just a thin outline of light to separate and define her form from the shadows on the left would help.
I hope this is fair. You rock!